Reach Your Dream

Practice Writing Test "FLOWER"

PRACTICE IELTS : WRITING TEST

Make a story about flower with sentence connectors.

When i go to Gedong Songo of temple, i saw many florist in there. There is near with Bandungan hometown. In that time, i visited that place. I saw many flower in there. I view a good and interesting flower. I give a question to florist. What is flower that have a good shape, species of orchid and have a purple colour?. She says that a flower is ghost orchid.

Ghost orchid is a species of orchid, seldom grow in Indonesia. It is interest orchid because it's engangered species and recently succes found life again. This spesies is very close to extinction because basicly this plant haven't ability for reproduction. Cultivation this plant is very rare and difficult. This species haven't leaf also disable to photosyntesis and disable produce their own food. This spesies has needed some spesific mushrooms which give them some food. So, this species have high price because of their attractive. Then, i saw another flower. I see many species of rose. I interest a blue rose. I ask to florist to tell me about blue rose.

Blue rose is one of many species of rose. This flower isn't grow naturally. it's a result from research which do a company in Japan. Blue rose have a symbol if we give to someone. It's declare feel someone which we want but we can't reach his. Blue rose is more impression something which we cann't say it. Finally, i buy it because i interest in it's colour, unique. Many people rare have it. After i buy blue rose, i continue my trip to Gedong songo of temple.

Practice Writing Test " LETTER TO MY FRIEND"

PRACTICE IELTS : WRITING TEST

You have a friend who lives in city abroad. you have decided that you would like to apply to a course at one of the college in this city.

Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

Dear Mr. Albert
In Hokaido, Japan

Sorry Sir, if my letter has disturbed your time. I want ask some help from you. I heard from Miss Ela that you are living in Hokaido, Japan now for continued your Doctor degree and i want hear your story until get support your professor and get schoolarship from Indonesia goverment.

Now, i still studying preparation IELTS to get high score. If i get high score, i will contact you to help me get support and schoolarship from Indonesia goverment. May I ask your help now? how to contact a professor from email or from website? How to get schoolarship from Indonesia or Japan goverment.

I'm sure, i will get it if i ty to hard study. My plan for continue my master degree in your country. Japan is a big diligent people and developed country. So, i plan to continued in there. I will take an engineering of petroleum. Why, Sir? because i want be a assistant or manager in PERTAMINA laboratory. Maybe, you can looking for me a professor in there.

In the next year, i will consent to my study. it is my dream, Sir. I hope, you can help me and support me that ever be your student. Okey, Sir? I also will ask help to Miss Kadarwati who continued her study in Australia. I also try in Australia. Maybe in Melbourne University and take an engineering of gas and oil. That university is very famous. It's certificate has appropriate in the world. Same to with university in Japan.

You can tell me about how to call a professor, interview with her/him, send a letter via email or website, go and meet with her/him. Maybe you have experienced about it.

Thiss is my letter. Sorry, Sir if my letter isn't polite and disturb your time. Thank's for your attention. see you next time.

Atini Ma'rufah

My Desain "ATCEMNES BUTIK SHOP"

ATCEMNES BUTIK SHOP

(ATINI CHEMISTRY UNNES)

Berikut ini merupakan sebagian dari desain dan baju buatanku sendiri. ^^

Practice Chatting with an elderly's Canada

I'M HAPPY TO BE YOUR FRIEND'S

On this holiday, i use my free time to get a relationship with some one in my purpose country. I succes for this. Below my chat with her. ^^

[11:38:36 AM] Atiece MakPoh: Thank's for your confirm, I'm very glad to be your friend
[11:39:02 AM] MA : your very weilcome ..
[11:39:11 AM] Melvina : do you play Yoville
[11:39:57 AM] Atiece MakPoh: sorry sister, i don't like play game...
[11:40:11 AM] MA : okay
[11:40:13 AM] Atiece MakPoh: are you come from toronto?
[11:40:23 AM] MA : yes
[11:40:42 AM] MA : where are you from
[11:41:41 AM] Atiece MakPoh: i come from indonesia. and next year, maybe i come to canada. Now i'm training to be a caregiver in canada
[11:42:05 AM] MA : that is very good
[11:42:24 AM] MA : some jobs in that area here
[11:44:39 AM] Atiece MakPoh: yes, but i don't know where i will live in there, i'm still training in Indonesia. So, i want to be your friend.
[11:45:02 AM] MA : that would be nice
[11:45:14 AM] MA : to be friends that is
[11:45:18 AM] Atiece MakPoh: :)
[11:45:23 AM] MA : Canada is very big
[11:47:03 AM] Atiece MakPoh: Yes,., different in Indonesia. ehm....yesterday, my friend was fly in your country and live in British Columbia. And next week, my friends also fly and live in Sasketcewan.
[11:47:43 AM] MA : both places a long way away from Toronto
[11:47:48 AM] Atiece MakPoh: i still training english speaking and nursing
[11:47:55 AM] MA : I have live in both places
[11:50:09 AM] Atiece MakPoh: yes,,.,. Toronto is center of country,alright? :) and british columbia is the north country...
[11:50:19 AM] Atiece MakPoh: so far froum your place
[11:51:19 AM] MA: Toronto is about the middle and British Columbia is on the west coast
[11:51:56 AM] Atiece MakPoh: Ohh... sory friends, if i disturb your time :)
[11:52:16 AM] Atiece MakPoh: maybe we can talk again in other time
[11:52:23 AM] MA: no you are not bothering me
[11:52:32 AM] MA: now is fine
[11:52:52 AM] Atiece MakPoh: what are doing now?
[11:53:14 AM] MA: playing Yoville and watching TV
[11:56:31 AM] MA: and what are you doing
[11:58:33 AM] Atiece MakPoh: I'm study how speak english fluently because i am not yet speak quickly, :) whether the couple photo is a picture of your facebook?
[11:59:25 AM] MA: which pictures
[11:59:59 AM] Atiece MakPoh: in your photo profil together a man
[12:00:27 PM] MA: oh I will have to look to see what I have there
[12:01:41 PM] Atiece MakPoh: Oke.. i want to see your picture :)
[12:03:28 PM] MA: are you looking at the one one with a man and a woman in uniform sitting down
[12:07:41 PM] MeA: so you see the picture of 2 ladies, a man and a little boy
[12:07:51 PM] Atiece MakPoh: a woman in uniform with a man is smiling in that picture... may i know, how old are you? what shoud i call to you?
[12:08:04 PM] Atiece MakPoh: Okey,.. i will see
[12:08:24 PM] MA: I am 67
[12:08:38 PM] MA: and Melvina is fine to call me
[12:09:30 PM] MA: the man and woman smiling was take tonight at a Candle light Service
[12:09:35 PM] MA: I am the lady
[12:10:27 PM] Atiece MakPoh: yes, I know Melvina.
[12:10:50 PM] Atiece MakPoh: it's seem happy family
[12:10:58 PM] MA: did you see the other picture I was talking about
[12:11:32 PM] MA: it is my great grandson on my knee, my grandson and my daughter with me
[12:13:13 PM] Atiece MakPoh: i see...
[12:13:14 PM] MA: the next picture to the one with the man is my co-chair Sanjeev, the Mayor and the Minister of Sports iin the Candaian governemt
[12:13:45 PM] MA: our uniforms are The Royal Canadian Legion
[12:14:11 PM] Atiece MakPoh: you look like a famous woman. oh so great.. :)
[12:14:36 PM] MA: no I am not famous .. just look that way
[12:15:11 PM] MA: you are the first one to say I look famous
[12:15:21 PM] Atiece MakPoh: :D
[12:15:46 PM] Atiece MakPoh: yes, if i see in your picture, you are a wonderful woman
[12:16:07 PM] MA: thank you very much
[12:16:20 PM] Atiece MakPoh: maybe carier woman in your youth
[12:17:01 PM] MA: I did a lot of things in my youth
[12:17:40 PM] Atiece MakPoh: you can share it with me....
[12:18:13 PM] MA: I don't know how to do that
[12:18:35 PM] MA: Sanjeev just sent them to me
[12:19:02 PM] MA: when I want a picture I right click on it and save it
[12:22:37 PM] Atiece MakPoh: oww.,.,what is the event you took that picture? sorry if i reply your message very long time because i want you understand my message and maybe my english skill still low
[12:22:52 PM] Atiece MakPoh: :)
[12:23:27 PM] MA: it was a Candle Light Memoral Service
[12:25:45 PM] MA: in rememberance to Vimy Ridge (95 years) the beging of The Royal Canadian Legion (85) years and Victory in Europe ((77 years)
[12:25:57 PM] Atiece MakPoh: how are you now? are you sick to sit in a wheelchair?
[12:26:22 PM] MA: I have Post Polio Syndrom
[12:27:21 PM] MA: I had polio as a child and the weaken musles came back after man years .. I have been in a whellchair for 21 years now
[12:27:29 PM] MA: almost 22 years
[12:27:55 PM] MA: but that does not stop me
[12:28:40 PM] Atiece MakPoh: wow,.,.,great! i like your spirit
[12:29:18 PM] MA: it is the only way to go
[12:29:55 PM] MeA: to many people just sit around and complain when someting like this happens to them
[12:32:17 PM] Atiece MakPoh: in your youth, you work or at home? to be honest, I do not know Candle Light Memoral service. maybe it's a big event
[12:33:01 PM] MA: it is a special service im memory of the past events
[12:33:16 PM] MA: yes I worked when I was young
[12:34:07 PM] MA: first in nurming then later doing many different things like owning my own courier company until I enede up in the wheelchair
[12:34:51 PM] Atiece MakPoh: but you seems a famous woman in your picture, not as a sick woman. I really like your think, your spirit
[12:34:57 PM] Atiece MakPoh: courier company?
[12:35:48 PM] MA: it is a deliervry service where you pick something up at one place and deliiever it to anther
[12:38:40 PM] Atiece MakPoh: oww,.,great....
[12:39:07 PM] MA: it was fun as well as work
[12:39:10 PM] Atiece MakPoh: and now you enjoy in your old
[12:39:14 PM] Atiece MakPoh: :)
[12:39:31 PM] Ma: yes I make it a happy time
[12:41:36 PM] Atiece MakPoh: I salute with you,.,. aren't you go in my country for holiday?
[12:41:46 PM] Atiece MakPoh: or maybe in other coubtry?
[12:41:57 PM] Atiece MakPoh: travelling with your family
[12:42:44 PM] MA: I would love to travel to different countres but can't afford it
[12:42:59 PM] MA: I have been to the US in the past
[12:43:37 PM] MA: I am going to Halifax in Juen .. the is in Nova Scotia, Canada
[12:44:30 PM] Atiece MakPoh: You go around canada?? oh i want....i want quickly go in your country
[12:45:01 PM] Atiece MakPoh: it's amazing for me
[12:45:27 PM] MA: yes I travel in Canada
[12:46:17 PM] Atiece MakPoh: wow...it seem wonderful place
[12:46:44 PM] MA: it is a very beautiful place .. all areas are different
[12:48:15 PM] Atiece MakPoh: really? wow... Canada is the biggest country and developed country
[12:48:40 PM] Atiece MakPoh: I want go in your country because i want get permanent resident
[12:49:08 PM] Atiece MakPoh: if i get permanent residence, i want study my master degree
[12:49:25 PM] MA: yes it is a big country .. the biggest area wise
[12:49:32 PM] Atiece MakPoh: but it still my dream
[12:49:44 PM] MA: very good
[12:50:16 PM] MA: yes we all dream as when you stop dreaming you gove up on life
[12:52:50 PM] Atiece MakPoh: Thanks for your attention melvina, maybe we can talk again in the next time.. i will take a bath :)
[12:53:22 PM] MA: okay nice chatting with you
[12:53:30 PM] MA: have a great day God Bless
[12:53:40 PM] Atiece MakPoh: see you.... :)
[12:53:53 PM] MA: see you